I need someone to fix an essay about space usage.

I want to see you incorporate some type of theory about space

 

 

into your essay. Possibly consider talking about why Disneyland

 

looks the way it does.

 

 Think about what each different land represents as far as space

 

and design is concerned.

 

 You have a lot to work with here and I am sure you will be able to

 

find some things that  will help you expand on this great start.I also would like to see

 

you dive a little deeper  into aspects of the parks design that make use of space to either tell a story or to invoke  that “happiness” you refer to. If you add those to your essay I feel like that will add another dimension to your essay. Good work!