I want to see you incorporate some type of theory about space
into your essay. Possibly consider talking about why Disneyland
looks the way it does.
Think about what each different land represents as far as space
and design is concerned.
You have a lot to work with here and I am sure you will be able to
find some things that will help you expand on this great start.I also would like to see
you dive a little deeper into aspects of the parks design that make use of space to either tell a story or to invoke that “happiness” you refer to. If you add those to your essay I feel like that will add another dimension to your essay. Good work!
