total of 3 responses, 200 words in each response, so be thorough and answer ALL of the following questions.
1. Write down three things the writer does well in this paper.
2. Write down three things the writer needs to revise
3. Is the essay written in the active or passive voice?
4. Point out a few sentences you feel are described in vivid detail — that really make the paper feel alive and visual.
5. Paragraphs: Are the ideas organized in a logical fashion? Does each paragraph contain only one idea? Does the paper build toward a logical/fulfilling ending? Do you feel a sense of completion or is something missing?
6. Note any obvious grammatical errors such as comma splices, run-ons or fragments.
